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Receding Waters

Posted: November 1st, 2014, 10:23 pm
by Tjflowers80
The night the waters receded
My heart found solace within;
Turning away from one so conceded
To allow the spirit to re begin.

There's no way of knowing
What kind of prick you are;
The personality that your showing
Makes you venture from your status of star.

I once thought you truly cared
Giving me the needed strength
But now I know why you shared
And why I didn't go the extra length.

Goodbye my redheaded man.

Re: Receding Waters

Posted: November 2nd, 2014, 4:22 pm
by saw
the ebb and flow of life
no one can hold back the cycles
of interaction when the situation demands a shift.....
still the river rolls

well done

Re: Receding Waters

Posted: November 2nd, 2014, 6:13 pm
by WIREMAN
concede the conceit and u will find the control no more.....life a lesson continually learned or did i mean don't get burned???.....lovely read 8)

Re: Receding Waters

Posted: November 2nd, 2014, 10:41 pm
by Tjflowers80
Wes, saw and wireman thank you all for your replies. It is deceit and fake people who inspired this one. I think my heart went mentally out for trusting them. Wes definitely sick of kissing frogs, time for my prince to show. Saw the cycle for me seems to lead to my own constant hell due to stupidity particularly mine. Lol. Wireman I've learned to let go of control these past months, control seems to be the thing burning my butt nonstop. But I think these past months have been the waters that drown out the hurt and bring the comfort needed to survive the the scars. Thank you all.

Jess