No Longer Looking

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68degrees
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No Longer Looking

Post by 68degrees » November 16th, 2014, 9:44 pm

This man, an empty room, carries
his cracked heart

in his weary arms, and no table
to set it down

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Re: No Longer Looking

Post by judih » November 16th, 2014, 11:49 pm

what a fine sketch of a abject situation
beauty even in despair

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Re: No Longer Looking

Post by WIREMAN » November 17th, 2014, 11:27 am

love this poetry....thanks for sharing...
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: No Longer Looking

Post by 68degrees » November 18th, 2014, 9:22 pm

Thanks.

And thanks.

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