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Claims of the soul

Posted: November 27th, 2014, 12:18 am
by Tjflowers80
No more;
Go demon;
Leave this shore;
I claim my freedom!

I am born anew;
My light outshines thy dark;
My soul is brighter than you;
My freedom shall embark.

This is my journey;
I'm leaving you behind;
Woe nebulous, we both are free;
Your chains I unbind!

Do your worse my foe;
No longer do I fear thee demon;
Tis you I've let go
And now we both have our freedom!

Re: Claims of the soul

Posted: November 27th, 2014, 2:12 am
by revolutionR
You know, this is a powerful invocation. To put it in your own poem
makes it powerful.

Re: Claims of the soul

Posted: November 27th, 2014, 2:06 pm
by saw
i like the ending.....acknowledging the symbiosis

Re: Claims of the soul

Posted: November 30th, 2014, 12:27 am
by Tjflowers80
Thank you for your comments.