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Breaking into dream

Posted: December 2nd, 2014, 1:53 am
by Tjflowers80
If in a moment time is suspended,
Life in general not recommended,
I look to the vision within the whole of me,
Giving the impression I should never breathe.

Yet I am relaxed and full of life;
Breaking away from given strife,
Learning to handle rising twists;
Fighting through hellfire's tryst.

Go ahead I dare you to try;
Breathing deeply with the hidden lie;
Tis myself I had come to forsake,
But, now, the pain I no longer take.

They will see me as I rise,
Watching me through my eyes;
Growing strong through my fall;
Only to set fire to it all!

Re: Breaking into dream

Posted: December 2nd, 2014, 10:03 am
by the mingo
ah sweet arsonist 8)

Re: Breaking into dream

Posted: December 3rd, 2014, 12:26 am
by Tjflowers80
Lol. Not what your thinking but honey I love your style of thinking. Lol

Re: Breaking into dream

Posted: December 3rd, 2014, 12:24 pm
by the mingo
well, i may just blush - hey, you're the poe girl, right? didn't i hear you mention him? i was reading about him earlier this morning - discovered something about him i didn't know before -
there was one thing he wrote that i memorized long ago when the dinosaurs were still walking around the planet and before the War Between the States - i memorized it because it was the most erotic piece of writing i had ever read up to that time & it still stands to that test all these years later - it's his poem "Annabel Lee" -

And neither the angels in Heaven above
Nor the demons down under the sea
Can ever dissever my soul from the soul
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;

wooooooooyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeee! hell yeah, Mongolia! - anyways, i read this morning this poem is said to be the last thing he ever wrote before he died - didn't know that - is it true?

Re: Breaking into dream

Posted: December 3rd, 2014, 5:51 pm
by Tjflowers80
I think so. I love that poem too. Thanks