girl that lost her

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girl that lost her

Post by creativesoul » December 8th, 2014, 1:02 pm

the love affair was falling apart on the big samsung tv
she was waiting for some kind of sign about what to do next
looking for a visa- packed suitcases- crossing the date line

the time seemed so slow= deliberate
the pleasure was almost painful

there were things she packed that she had to see if she would even wear them this week in portland
she is awakened by desires for cigs
the pain in her body longed to become pleasure again

love and lust and all that turned to stardust
she perfumed herslef with oils from magic women
that knew the secrets of the universe

must be careful with these folks
sometimes it might all seem a hoax
maybe some think it is a tit for a tat
some others might not see it like that
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: girl that lost her

Post by revolutionR » December 8th, 2014, 2:16 pm

Could use some of those magic women oil

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Post by saw » December 9th, 2014, 10:38 am

whatever gets you closer to the universe, is a good thing....the mystery and honesty is palpable
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by WIREMAN » December 9th, 2014, 5:26 pm

chanel my #5.....likes these words 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Post by creativesoul » December 14th, 2014, 2:43 am

Popsicles
And stuff
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by creativesoul » December 14th, 2014, 4:10 am

Like a really old song playing on the wind up phonograph
The lampshades I painted look awesome-
Surf and cosmic consciences
The dare devil religion- adrenaline junkie- thrill seekers
A taste of unforeseen pleasure
Although sometimes I become childish
Even vulnerable
The Amazon wants a less rowdy lifestyle
Music and art
Maybe even love will visit my house
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by Arcadia » December 15th, 2014, 1:21 pm

I was bewitched, bothered & bewildered by this line & your painting ...! :D :wink:

there were things she packed ...

Gracias for sharing it, creativesoul!!!!!!

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Re: girl that lost her

Post by creativesoul » December 15th, 2014, 1:39 pm

Like every journey there are the coastal regions
And the interior
Where change and my navel
Collide
The womb brings beautiful people
That I loved to here
Now that airplane is going to take me
To them
Like always
I have been summoned
Made an amends today
About previously sloppy love
Like honey in the sun
He remembers the light
but he is swallowed by his own darkness
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: girl that lost her

Post by creativesoul » December 15th, 2014, 7:35 pm

That simple suggestion
At the corners of your mouth
Defiant mockery
That once
Even we
We're prey to our wild hearts
I guess
Maybe
Because
What goes up must come down
I want to no why
No woman no cry
I still think of you
I would never be able to deny my love for you -?no matter how far I roam
Buffalo woman is so full of shit sometimes like really-

are you kidding me?
yes i fall for that- i have excluded all humans under 6 feet tall-
amazon women in australia made me feel small- even - hot looking-
it was kind of hot down under
i believe that love is going to walk in my door-
no matter how foolish a notion-
i think i will know him
because the light recognizes each other
once like sand
he irritated the shit out of me
and i became a pearl
One heart for the people
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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