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68degrees
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Revelation

Post by 68degrees » January 1st, 2015, 8:38 pm

During service
yesterday, the sun
threw its light
through
blue and red
stained glass

God whispered
the latest gossip
about my deceased
parents
into my ear

an hour later
enough snow
had fallen
to cover
any signs
of real life.
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the mingo
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Re: Revelation

Post by the mingo » January 2nd, 2015, 12:12 am

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: Revelation

Post by WIREMAN » January 2nd, 2015, 8:51 pm

the light shines
down thru the
clerestory upon
the pews.....
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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Arcadia
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Re: Revelation

Post by Arcadia » January 3rd, 2015, 9:24 am

what a sequence, 68degrees...! Gracias for sharing it!!! :)
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whoaisme
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Re: Revelation

Post by whoaisme » January 3rd, 2015, 4:42 pm

well done 68degrees!

:D
"From the sudden invasion of a mind not my own in the world. This I will record. For whom? For m y s e l f, beyond denial and beyond indifference." - Philip Lamantia
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68degrees
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Re: Revelation

Post by 68degrees » January 3rd, 2015, 10:53 pm

Appreciate folks liking this. Thanks.
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dadio
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Re: Revelation

Post by dadio » January 5th, 2015, 8:27 am

Revelationary poem; very good. 8)
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