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A Robot Builder Makes Breakfast for a Nomad

Posted: January 31st, 2015, 2:35 am
by the mingo
a robot builder
makes breakfast
for a nomad -

that's what i do here
i'm not kidding -

i'm not kidding -
i will stab this poem with a knife
i will make it bleed & show the blood for the life is in the blood
i will cut the throat of everything that leads to it
past present future it does not matter

smug elements of this 21st century beware !
i write day & night beyond the beginnings of the rain
i can see the track of the rabbit with the serious euphoria of
a submersible burned out house dingo packing world war one money in its pockets -

yes beware 21st century
you ain't shit to me
you or any of your dedicated cows under fire
or your vain chickens with pleasant brains far from home
you can send your worn old sentiments - your crippled signs
in wave after gigantic wave and i will turn their tsunami syllables
into birthday cake for my dogs -

i have seriously fucked-up stuff - nothin' but trouble -
you may want the spirit's return but you have forgotten
that on the cold mountain of birth
the memories sleep -

Re: A Robot Builder Makes Breakfast for a Nomad

Posted: January 31st, 2015, 4:10 am
by dadio
8)

Re: A Robot Builder Makes Breakfast for a Nomad

Posted: January 31st, 2015, 10:31 am
by the mingo
Thx Terry and mornin' to ya this fine day 8)

Re: A Robot Builder Makes Breakfast for a Nomad

Posted: January 31st, 2015, 11:19 am
by justwalt
gourmet construction soup kitchen

verses a' la cartel, what the hell

waiting for seconds

Re: A Robot Builder Makes Breakfast for a Nomad

Posted: January 31st, 2015, 11:53 am
by the mingo
damn walt - this kind of thing don't happen easy anymore - i mean if it's just gonna fall off my lips with a tweek here & there fine - but if i have to work at the thing hell with it ya know? - i don't want to work 8) - Thx walt

www.youtube.com/watch?v=yzumKzjzJp4

Re: A Robot Builder Makes Breakfast for a Nomad

Posted: January 31st, 2015, 1:29 pm
by revolutionR
fun 8)

Re: A Robot Builder Makes Breakfast for a Nomad

Posted: January 31st, 2015, 2:11 pm
by Doreen Peri
KaPOW! ... great piece.

Re: A Robot Builder Makes Breakfast for a Nomad

Posted: January 31st, 2015, 5:58 pm
by justwalt
i don't want to work
I'd give up manhattan just to sweep floors

nice work!!

Re: A Robot Builder Makes Breakfast for a Nomad

Posted: February 1st, 2015, 10:55 am
by sweetwater
I sort of liked that album there were a couple of good guitar songs on that album i think ken kesey said something about going further and deeper but then no one's ever heard much from him lately ...

Re: A Robot Builder Makes Breakfast for a Nomad

Posted: February 1st, 2015, 11:01 am
by sweetwater
i forgot
you are challenging

free speech or hate speech

you are on a watch list
for representing a public safety argument

after you have successfully been
re-introduced to society and relative norms

you will be released

you may be entitled to restitution
if you can prove your freedoms have been violated

the larger question with respect
to the challenge of free speech

is the argument as to whether
behaviour in in conflict with other rights and freedoms

and it is not to say
that words themselves don't constitute anything
but words

why do 'you' feel you are being compromised

it is more of a question of whether
you are representing

violence

and to question of all the things
you could represent

you think violent words themselves
don't constitute evidence

but it does constitute

that it won't be the words
that exist as to what is concerning

as much to say

i think you have better things to do
and better things to say

Re: A Robot Builder Makes Breakfast for a Nomad

Posted: February 1st, 2015, 11:06 am
by WIREMAN
way beyond poetry mingo.....all hail mongolia!

Re: A Robot Builder Makes Breakfast for a Nomad

Posted: February 1st, 2015, 11:16 am
by sweetwater
if you don't identify yourself
then i guess

slander wouldn't be slander

would it ?

the question
is whether one becomes worthy of being read

??

insults are fun
sometimes

sometimes they get to you !!!

...

if free speech constitutes
scatology all the time
not to say you are perfect

who would read it

or read it all the time

as much as if your words are just the representation
of violence as free speech

what's the point
really of saying anything

...

your audience or fans
would be what

lovers of violence ?
sentiments of free speech
expressed as the right to say violent things ?

it is not the words itself

it is why you are attracted to it
or what compels you

free speech or violence ?

unanswered question really !!!!

and then of course

aesthetically
it would be overly interesting

but sometimes it would be a thoughtful
contemplation

but how would the reader think about it
or even to say respond ?

with love ?

in the context of violent words

or dis-associate

for which you would be autistic

they don't really like relating to neuroypicals
cause like dude they are hypo hypo hypo

not that autistics are violent

they just like to be left alone

that's it

you want to be left alone !!!!!!!