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time spent like loose change

Posted: January 31st, 2015, 1:16 pm
by mtmynd
time spent like loose change

all this time spent like loose change
in the bottom corner of a pocket
about as useful as the lint next to it

what has become of this momentary blink
this brief period of growth and near death

can't escape its mighty truth
swallowing individuality
once that body no longer serves
its purpose over for ever
leaving particle remains
for the great earthly food chain
to continue the grand carnival
isolated billions of miles from nowhere
amusing only our selves

but we made love
shot our wads high and deep
screamed our orgasms to a god
created booze to dull our sharpness
partook of plants that escorted us
thru multiple plains of thought
broken codes of our past
dreamed of our future
only to pass beyond
with all the luggage strapped
upon our backs, hunched over
we carry the weight of our being
like all of life that came before

mtmynd

Re: time spent like loose change

Posted: January 31st, 2015, 1:28 pm
by revolutionR
You can say that again 8)

Re: time spent like loose change

Posted: January 31st, 2015, 3:00 pm
by the mingo
8) - 8)

- now leave me alone - I must take tea & attend my paws -

Re: time spent like loose change

Posted: January 31st, 2015, 3:01 pm
by Doreen Peri
this piece ROCKS!

Re: time spent like loose change

Posted: January 31st, 2015, 11:56 pm
by justwalt
hoping the void keeps all cosmic records for further review :lol:

Re: time spent like loose change

Posted: February 1st, 2015, 3:10 pm
by mtmynd
big thanks to you all for the comments! ;)

Re: time spent like loose change

Posted: February 1st, 2015, 3:34 pm
by WIREMAN
this is it.....unless the tibetans are right...but we wont know when were gone, so it doesnt really matter.....?'s like this killed jack kerouac, along with massive amounts of alcohol....o by the way nice write cecil!

Re: time spent like loose change

Posted: February 4th, 2015, 1:03 am
by mtmynd
WIREMAN wrote:this is it.....unless the tibetans are right...but we wont know when were gone, so it doesnt really matter.....?'s like this killed jack kerouac, along with massive amounts of alcohol....o by the way nice write cecil!

Gracias, amigo!