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justwalt
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don't ask

Post by justwalt » February 1st, 2015, 12:05 am

the farmhouse, large and solid,
over a hundred years old...
said to wife... yes wife, we need
to have a smaller place

fixed 'er up ready to sell... then
stepdaughter one needs to move
back in, with the boyfriend dude...
all's cool enough, she gets the whole
upstairs, a complete self contained apartment
with private entrance... that we had to build!!!

bla bla bla
that was over a year ago,
so stepdaughter two... and dude two
asked to move in as well, holy hell, swell,

so we split the first floor, private doors,
we share the kitchen and bath... upgraded 70%
yeah, build it and they will come... back, and back and back

said... wife, ya know the universe did this...
she says, "brought the kids back, ya I know..."
I said no... left us with a smaller place.

be specific or don't ask, kick, ouch!
be specific or don't ask, kick, ouch!
be specific or don't ask, kick, ouch!

thank you sir, may I have another


wgs/1/15
many is a word

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Re: don't ask

Post by dadio » February 1st, 2015, 4:57 am

8) Spot on.

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Re: don't ask

Post by sweetwater » February 1st, 2015, 10:54 am

I sort of liked that album there were a couple of good guitar songs on that album i think ken kesey said something about going further and deeper but then no one's ever heard much from him lately ...

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Re: don't ask

Post by justwalt » February 1st, 2015, 8:34 pm

thanks dudes

I'll get my teepee this year
many is a word

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