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the massive low

Posted: February 6th, 2015, 4:32 am
by whoaisme
many a world
i have fallen from
every word
of my grace,
said

slouch'd or suffering
immense.

the radio won't play
my song but stillness
as all the dance floors
of America
are approached at half staff
like the hands
of my grandmother
when she would make
a fist

like i was raised.

seldom is a world
i have yet to keep,
fallen
from grace
like drug store
cologne--

that which does not kill
me, adds flesh
and bone
to my "amen."

Re: the massive low

Posted: February 6th, 2015, 10:39 am
by sweetwater
very good read
enjoyed
thankyou

Re: the massive low

Posted: February 6th, 2015, 11:10 am
by the mingo
all hail flesh on the bone bone hell yes & amen - Mornin' Whoa!

Re: the massive low

Posted: February 6th, 2015, 2:33 pm
by whoaisme
thanks for reading and for your comments 8)

top of the mornin right back atcha, mingo :D

Re: the massive low

Posted: February 6th, 2015, 2:56 pm
by revolutionR
Very cool 8)