MARRY ME= AGAIN

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creativesoul
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MARRY ME= AGAIN

Post by creativesoul » February 6th, 2015, 3:20 pm

i know
that some of the best
love stories
are people who
tried and failed
then tried one more time
and stayed

i want you to want me'
kiss me
like it was the last time i will ever see you
the gasp for air
melt in your cheating kisses
the tongue flicks accross the skies
your eyes your laughter
what happened?
to sailing around the world
?
i miss you
more than you could know
and will you?
experience the glow
of having walked on thru the fire
lets go to the hot springs
again
lets get married
and not fuck it up---
lets get a drum
build a fire
sing under the stars

are you alive?
can you love?
sing to the stars above
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: MARRY ME= AGAIN

Post by revolutionR » February 6th, 2015, 3:29 pm

you were on a retreat, the hot springs revived you.

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Post by creativesoul » February 6th, 2015, 3:34 pm

i commanded the pieces of my soul= that i had loaned to people i loved to come home
- :idea:
seems that i needed these pieces after all :?:
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: MARRY ME= AGAIN

Post by revolutionR » February 6th, 2015, 3:42 pm

Hello there, from the gypsy in me to the gypsy in you, all my poems
are my me pieces. 8), Very pretty woman, you remind me of a girl
I met in high school. She was an acid queen muse to me. In that
summer of LOVE.

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Re: MARRY ME= AGAIN

Post by saw » February 6th, 2015, 6:43 pm

the poem zeroes in on the fleeting nature of life and how difficult it is to know when, what and how to keep something vibrant and honest ,as we get distracted by so many other things
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: MARRY ME= AGAIN

Post by 68degrees » February 6th, 2015, 10:06 pm

"kiss me
like it was the last time i will ever see you"

I don't know a person alive who wouldn't want this...

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Re: MARRY ME= AGAIN

Post by creativesoul » February 7th, 2015, 1:05 am

like that song dream a little dream of me- mama cass :mrgreen:
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: MARRY ME= AGAIN

Post by creativesoul » February 7th, 2015, 1:07 am

i bought a copy of 'infinite tide;\]' today
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by justwalt » February 7th, 2015, 1:23 am

many is a word

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