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if it were so...

Posted: February 10th, 2015, 12:29 pm
by creativesoul
the waves broke on my back
opened up the seacaves
where the shark was sleeping

the bran muffin without butter
healthfood inbtween my teeth
seaweed in my hair

i reach again for your vacant stares

i listen to the trains in the distance
watch the wind on the river

the liquid moved it back into place
there in that blue
i saw your face

Re: if it were so...

Posted: February 10th, 2015, 4:11 pm
by revolutionR
We are in an underwater world, the sleeping shark
is dreaming us. 8)

Re: if it were so...

Posted: February 10th, 2015, 9:47 pm
by creativesoul
Yes at tunnels in Kauai - at any rate- the day is perfect for this

Re: if it were so...

Posted: February 10th, 2015, 9:56 pm
by revolutionR
so it is...

Re: if it were so...

Posted: February 11th, 2015, 7:30 am
by saw
beautifully expressed....liquid sky....salty healing and meditation.....be well and keep writing