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trouble with a dead lover
Posted: February 12th, 2015, 12:30 pm
by the mingo
trouble with a dead lover
is you no longer have
anyone left to hold onto
and can't let go
Re: trouble with a dead lover
Posted: February 12th, 2015, 1:29 pm
by judih
deadless weight
armless hugs
yet there you are
Re: trouble with a dead lover
Posted: February 12th, 2015, 1:52 pm
by the mingo
yup, sad truths
are always a bitch -
some days i just shake
my cute little green meanie weenie at 'em
and go, "AHA !"

Re: trouble with a dead lover
Posted: February 12th, 2015, 3:23 pm
by saw
palpable power in a few lines....well done
Re: trouble with a dead lover
Posted: February 12th, 2015, 4:26 pm
by Doreen Peri
I'm sorry.... my sincere condolences. I don't know when this happened. If you posted something about it, I missed it. Your poem made me feel like crying.

Re: trouble with a dead lover
Posted: February 12th, 2015, 5:31 pm
by the mingo
Thank you, saw - goin' for the asian model these days, getting too lazy for anything else - up with minimalism! Plus been reading a ton of Basho and other japanese boppers lately -
Re: trouble with a dead lover
Posted: February 12th, 2015, 5:33 pm
by the mingo
Miss T - o what you gone and crying 'bout? Cut it out or I'll get crying too !

Re: trouble with a dead lover
Posted: February 12th, 2015, 7:59 pm
by WIREMAN
that narrow road to the deep interior has taken hold....u r walking with the blessed

Re: trouble with a dead lover
Posted: February 12th, 2015, 8:34 pm
by the mingo
that narrow road to the deep interior has taken hold....u r walking with the blessed
that may be the truth - the writing has seduced me but bad
Re: trouble with a dead lover
Posted: February 13th, 2015, 11:49 am
by 68degrees
Just wanted to tell you that after five or six reads now, this just keeps getting better. I keep coming back to it.
68degrees
Re: trouble with a dead lover
Posted: February 13th, 2015, 3:41 pm
by the mingo
Thx 68 - we all should act to lift each other up whenever the opportunity arises - even when we don't know that's what we are doing - Thank you -

Re: trouble with a dead lover
Posted: February 14th, 2015, 12:45 pm
by WIREMAN
true dat mingo!