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Far Off

Posted: February 17th, 2015, 6:34 pm
by the mingo
boats in harbor, coast in mist
far off, one hopes very far, the place
where everything disappears

Re: Far Off

Posted: February 17th, 2015, 6:50 pm
by saw
I really like this new venture in brevity mingo....the poem is open to so much....

Re: Far Off

Posted: February 17th, 2015, 10:16 pm
by the mingo
Thx, saw, I'm discovering making less do more has more than one level to it in regards one's own perception of things. Thx again

Re: Far Off

Posted: February 17th, 2015, 10:34 pm
by WIREMAN
all hail mongolia!

Re: Far Off

Posted: February 17th, 2015, 11:46 pm
by judih
that distant place
we'll never reach
but, so what!

Re: Far Off

Posted: February 18th, 2015, 9:59 am
by the mingo
Thanks wireman & judih ! 8) 8)