Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

Rain falls
into our lives
like grace,
rinsing years
from folded hands
and damp prayers

Only folks who keep
secrets understand
they have been invited
to share in its serenity

I believe it.

i'd rather read:

"rinsing years
from folded hands
and damp prayers"


but i'm just splitting hairs, this is a good one! keep em coming 68

whoa:

Yes. I can see that change. I don't mind splitting hairs, I just don't have many left

68degrees

do secrets breed serenity? I suppose if you are keeping secrets then someone shared them-- or are the secrets our own?

katydid:

Yes. But only when they remain secret. Once out, no.

Maybe. We probably have more personal secrets, than secrets between people, don't you think?

Thanks for looking here and asking.

68degrees

i appreciate this swish of a cleansing
the open invitation for catharsis
there for the taking

"swish" is such a nice sounding word...almost a wish, but just that much more.

68degrees