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creativesoul
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Candy

Post by creativesoul » March 21st, 2015, 9:31 am

That smell of smelting sugar
Way down the street
Piano music and the sea
Ballerina dreams on a face
That is wearing an unknown dreamier
Facet on a stone that only lets a certain light
Thru
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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shadowplay
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Re: Candy

Post by shadowplay » March 21st, 2015, 10:45 am

'minds me of Seaside, Oregon
sweet place

I like the signature quote on your profile. Can't agree more. Makes me want to adopt 'Dignity is for chumps' as a motto. Very inspiring.

lovely piece, thank you ---
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revolutionR
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Re: Candy

Post by revolutionR » March 21st, 2015, 12:53 pm

candy is dandy, keep my ears handy, I want to see you sandy. 8)

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Re: Candy

Post by creativesoul » March 21st, 2015, 2:05 pm

Gimmie some sugar
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Candy

Post by revolutionR » March 21st, 2015, 5:13 pm

I gave her sugar for sugar, gave me salt for salt. :twisted:

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WIREMAN
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Re: Candy

Post by WIREMAN » March 21st, 2015, 9:08 pm

i call my sugar candy
and it would be so dandy
to make her mine o mine
do i hear nat king cole singin? :lol: 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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