The metaphor for a commercial

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sweetwater
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The metaphor for a commercial

Post by sweetwater » March 21st, 2015, 10:26 am

The box store analogy in the strip mall refrain
The big soft drink morning of rhyme
The kiosk selling smokeless nicotine
The big event ... event !
The star makers ideology of a seeming
Noble pursuit ... The appeal to a franchising
Story about sequels and populist lingerie
The slim lines anecdote of topical popularity

There is a clearance sale on
most items as is predicted by
the forecast
Of meteors projecting toward

the great without ...
Being as it were within
the context of spending as if it

were without ... Or maybe ...
Which is a great conjunctive ... If
it is conjunctive ... And how it seems the use of words itself were sale items in an arbitrary review of good taste ...
And the question begs ...

Maybe it doesn't
The mystification seems intentional

Though
Balling eyes and moist in the begging ..

. A seeming post modern analysis
of poetry on sale !
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shadowplay
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Re: The metaphor for a commercial

Post by shadowplay » March 21st, 2015, 10:41 am

reminiscent of conjunctivitis
very nice
fills my haranguing file folders full of angst
aha!!
cuz this bitch don't miss a clearance sale nuh uh
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