jigsaw sunrise

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saw
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jigsaw sunrise

Post by saw » March 22nd, 2015, 2:00 pm

emerging sun...
frontal lobe
penetration,
captured eyes
acrobatically decoding
cryptic messages
acid dots
dashes of human salt
life imagined
not like the one we perceived,
impossible
to decipher in the glaring
newness of morning...
The Daily Gift...
newspaper thrown
from deep space
by a boy on a flying skateboard,
tattoo of your mother's face on his chest,
plunks your noggin,
Extra Extra
read the lines on my palm
chew my tea leaves
spit out the juice,
expand the plot
a female visitor has come
with aqualungs
breathe a new piece
of the puzzle,
dance the jig
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

saw
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Re: jigsaw sunrise

Post by saw » March 25th, 2015, 8:59 pm

tuu obtuse ?
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Doreen Peri
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Re: jigsaw sunrise

Post by Doreen Peri » March 26th, 2015, 6:26 pm

I like it, Steve .... not too obtuse at all ... love the imagery!

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Re: jigsaw sunrise

Post by revolutionR » March 26th, 2015, 6:52 pm

we should be hit in the noggen, by the poetry news 8)

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WIREMAN
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Re: jigsaw sunrise

Post by WIREMAN » March 26th, 2015, 9:40 pm

u still get a paper delivered....wow....i remember trying to collect, them people was hard to find :lol:
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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