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Re: walls

Posted: March 25th, 2015, 3:12 pm
by whoaisme
the rhyming kinda bores me.

nothing about it here, specifically, i just tend to dislike most rhyming.

i did love these line:

"Trust is not easy for this lonely flesh,
I felt what was true before it left."

and

"My walls built to protect and save,
are now blocking love for my heart."

well done sir wesdan keep at it!