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i feel the scent in your eyes
tasting the words that they see
i taste the peace in your touch
hearing of the visions that will be
i smell the presence
of skin tightly talking
pounding up wordlessly
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pounding up wordlessly
pounding up wordlessly
.homesick. but homeless.
Re: pounding up wordlessly
simple and poignant, so exhilarating to imagine the senses, sensing more than they were designed for...like left side and right side brain than can switch if they really need to...there is so much more than verbal communication, but in this case I'm glad you decided to express yourself... 

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you may end up where you are heading
you may end up where you are heading
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Re: pounding up wordlessly
Ahhh.... ain't love grand? You lucky man! Loved how you used the senses in this ... tasting words, tasting peace, hearing vision ... Lovely!
Re: pounding up wordlessly
saw - your continued seeing is sincerely appreciated. as well as nourishing. thank you. again.saw wrote:simple and poignant, so exhilarating to imagine the senses, sensing more than they were designed for...like left side and right side brain than can switch if they really need to...there is so much more than verbal communication, but in this case I'm glad you decided to express yourself...
riteon.
.homesick. but homeless.
Re: pounding up wordlessly
doors - simply; thank you. but you know how heartfelt those 2 small words carry epic proportions.Doreen Peri wrote:Ahhh.... ain't love grand? You lucky man! Loved how you used the senses in this ... tasting words, tasting peace, hearing vision ... Lovely!
riteon
.homesick. but homeless.
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