on the edge of the milky way

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on the edge of the milky way

Post by WIREMAN » March 29th, 2015, 3:28 pm

the grass is greener yet.........
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me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: on the edge of the milky way

Post by theirishsea » March 29th, 2015, 7:22 pm

:) I'm punching the "like" button. I like how you invoke "the edge".
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.

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Re: on the edge of the milky way

Post by WIREMAN » March 29th, 2015, 7:40 pm

kinda went into
raga blues
performance mode
on this one Dan
thanks for getting it 8)
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Re: on the edge of the milky way

Post by mnaz » March 30th, 2015, 2:09 am

I was bored a long time ago
on this pointless low obstacle course,
finding things to whip ya into a frenzy
constantly, every day; the economy
depends on it, and it's getting old.

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Re: on the edge of the milky way

Post by the mingo » March 30th, 2015, 4:15 pm

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: on the edge of the milky way

Post by saw » March 30th, 2015, 5:10 pm

"in a state of it is what it is
there's really no need for change"

that captures the apathy, the anti-revolution numbness

perfectly

so far the electronic amusement is enough
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: on the edge of the milky way

Post by WIREMAN » March 30th, 2015, 8:11 pm

thanks for chking out this performance piece...you all...its partially on the raga blues album i did with jamie wilson...back in 'o6.... with a little twist to the turn it takes.....i always take off with that galaxy premise in performance....feeling like some kinda "kung fu tv priest" :lol:
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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