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By morning

Posted: April 21st, 2015, 4:52 am
by Wayne R Baker
By morning these lines will be
forgotten, like the bare boughs
and the flaming fire that sent
gypsy embers into the heaven
of your eyes.

The wolfing wind that raised
the eaves will have hushed into a
songbirds breath,
as sweet as the linnet's song.

But still those midnight words
remain folded.
Only written upon the cool side of
my pillow,
where strange tears dry.

Re: By morning

Posted: April 21st, 2015, 8:11 am
by saw
very nice..I like the whole poem, but in my mind the first stanza can stand on its own

in any case, nice work...welcome to S8

Re: By morning

Posted: April 21st, 2015, 8:59 am
by Wayne R Baker
I agree it could. Thanks for the read and the welcome.

Re: By morning

Posted: April 21st, 2015, 10:25 am
by creativesoul
[list=]nice[/list]

Re: By morning

Posted: April 21st, 2015, 6:17 pm
by Tjflowers80
Always remembered are the words that are written in stone and here they are. Very beautiful.

Re: By morning

Posted: April 22nd, 2015, 11:25 am
by creativesoul
Nice- be forgotten! Mmmmm

Re: By morning

Posted: April 22nd, 2015, 11:34 am
by Wayne R Baker
Thank you all for your kind words.

Re: By morning

Posted: April 23rd, 2015, 8:40 pm
by Doreen Peri
Lovely verse. Love the imagery and phrasing. Glad you joined us here!