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traversing my mind
Posted: April 23rd, 2015, 8:46 am
by wylde
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you lace your dress
a cross, akimbo
traversing my mind
drawing me inwards
as you hold; dancing glances askance
with the i of your consciousness
reflecting me in what i wade
out into sea
.
Re: traversing my mind
Posted: April 23rd, 2015, 10:31 am
by Wayne R Baker
Been missing your writs bro.
Re: traversing my mind
Posted: April 23rd, 2015, 6:50 pm
by WIREMAN
i used to live with a dancer, man she could really do the akimbo....
Re: traversing my mind
Posted: April 24th, 2015, 3:39 am
by wylde
Wayne R Baker wrote:Been missing your writs bro.
wayne - thanks bro. sincerely appreciate the compliment.
Re: traversing my mind
Posted: April 24th, 2015, 3:49 am
by wylde
WIREMAN wrote:i used to live with a dancer, man she could really do the akimbo....
you lucky fish on a bicycle! akimbo is one hell of a dancing contortion.
thanks wire man.
Re: traversing my mind
Posted: April 24th, 2015, 7:55 am
by saw
succinct and lush
Re: traversing my mind
Posted: April 27th, 2015, 12:24 am
by fuchsiafestival!
Liked this back on GP. Glad to read it again.
Re: traversing my mind
Posted: April 28th, 2015, 3:46 am
by wylde
saw wrote:succinct and lush
saw - thanks for the read; seeing & feeling of it. appreciate all 3 of those aspects.
Re: traversing my mind
Posted: April 28th, 2015, 3:48 am
by wylde
fuchsiafestival! wrote:Liked this back on GP. Glad to read it again.
sistersun -thank you; and thanks for being re-nourished...
riteon.
Re: traversing my mind
Posted: April 28th, 2015, 11:40 pm
by justwalt
I got some leftover chicken-broccoli ...
kosher
Re: traversing my mind
Posted: April 30th, 2015, 5:22 am
by wylde
justwalt wrote:I got some leftover chicken-broccoli ...
kosher
Thanks Walt! the w3rd is gaudy tinsel, so that would be the perfect accompaniment...
like a hammer & a nail.
peace and happy trees to you.