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Re: Dawn Awakens
Posted: April 23rd, 2015, 3:18 pm
by revolutionR
nice one.
Re: Dawn Awakens
Posted: April 23rd, 2015, 6:04 pm
by WIREMAN
like the imagery and space within the words....
Re: Dawn Awakens
Posted: April 24th, 2015, 1:45 am
by Tjflowers80
I love the last two lines. Very beautiful imagery. Very beautiful poem. Thanks!
Re: Dawn Awakens
Posted: April 25th, 2015, 7:17 am
by saw
there is a lot of talking going on in the woods, even the flowers and weeds have voices...that's why I feel so alive after a hike....like I tapped into the universal heartbeat
Re: Dawns Song
Posted: April 25th, 2015, 11:03 am
by Tjflowers80
Saw I know how you feel? I may a woman but I am no primpy one at that! Your comment is true in every way.
Re: Dawns Song
Posted: April 25th, 2015, 7:04 pm
by Atehequa
Received and felt in a good way.
Re: Dawns Song
Posted: April 26th, 2015, 11:48 pm
by fuchsiafestival!
Some of the images in this are pretty good. I like the idea of stars being restless. Punchy piece.