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rubix cubit - domino shadow

Posted: April 29th, 2015, 6:15 pm
by mtmynd
rubix cubit - domino shadow

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a pair of dots
a pair of dime
two times one
two times mind
to times too
i four to fie
fee so sum
all is not dumb
just some wyrds
running out
freefallin
with a doubt
juju bebop
clipper ships
cut in half
to the hips
join the joint
make em hole
drop too deep
discover soul
so silent sense
disturbs a sign
repeat the above
watch for rhyme
bungalow
bungalow
covered in snow
which is the way
a white rabbit go?

mercury lamplight
shining thru life
trans-parenting
two syllables
snake eyes
rolled twice
fallen leaves
as they went away
returning new moons
what did he say?

vertical tickles
raising tents
sheets askew
for fifteen scents
smelling life
thru birth canal
all went skyrockets
when peter swell
works for me
quite well you see
just sexualis
for her and me

bingo jingo
bingo jingo
exclamation clear
single thingo
single thingo
points reaching
for ever hear

m.t.mynd

Re: rubix cubit - domino shadow

Posted: May 1st, 2015, 2:41 pm
by david
smelling life
thru birth canal
This brought a hell of an image coupled with a UGH.
The rest was good fun too.

Re: rubix cubit - domino shadow

Posted: May 1st, 2015, 5:41 pm
by mtmynd
Gracias, David! It's all meant without seriousness... :)

Re: rubix cubit - domino shadow

Posted: May 1st, 2015, 6:05 pm
by saw
a jazzy riff that would sound good at the open mike...sounds good here too

Re: rubix cubit - domino shadow

Posted: May 2nd, 2015, 9:52 am
by mtmynd
Thx, Steve! There is a rhythm to it if read outloud.

Re: rubix cubit - domino shadow

Posted: May 2nd, 2015, 10:57 am
by WIREMAN
dre gots his mind on his money
u gots the swell on yur mind
enjoy the 1st thought flow
am i right?....of course i am
good to read some mtmynd:)

Re: rubix cubit - domino shadow

Posted: May 3rd, 2015, 12:21 am
by mtmynd
1st thought flow for sure...

Re: rubix cubit - domino shadow

Posted: May 19th, 2015, 3:31 pm
by Steve Plonk
Mtmynd, Outstanding piece...Sorry I missed posting earlier.
Really flows when read out loud :!: 8)

Re: rubix cubit - domino shadow

Posted: May 21st, 2015, 8:37 am
by mtmynd
Many thanks, Steve, and to all who came aboard this piece. Really appreciated.