Dear My Love

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m.n.i.w
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Dear My Love

Post by m.n.i.w » May 3rd, 2015, 2:26 pm

Dear My Love,

Questionable infidelities incriminating my soul like felonies. You've imprisoned my heart. But I have two heads and sometimes one gets ahead of me.

My Love.

Losing you is my number one fear. Losing myself is number two. Number three is losing my mind. But then again they resignate to one and two. Because 2. my mind makes me who I am and 1. You are all I think about.

My Love.

My mind wanders from time to time. My urges fluctuate and get out of line. I don't let my mind go. I'm reading from sign to sign. Flirtatious women displaying signals, I'm reading all the signs. But the thought of you alone stops me from reading between their lines.

My Love.

Your essence is more illuminated with your presence. The thought of you is enlightening. But you near me is exciting. Beauty you've defined it. I thought I was lost in a dream. But you've made my dreams coexist with reality. When we endure separation I resent individuality.

My Love.

Time doesn't last forever. Nothing at all is eternal. So while the time does exist, let our time together do the same. And let our passion burn like an inferno.

My Love.....
Last edited by m.n.i.w on June 8th, 2015, 10:01 am, edited 1 time in total.

saw
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Re: Dear My Love by m.n.i.w

Post by saw » May 4th, 2015, 9:27 am

I think this would be more powerful with more imagery, but having said that, who doesn't like getting a love letter ?
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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