City Lights

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d.knape
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City Lights

Post by d.knape » May 8th, 2015, 7:34 am

CITY LIGHTS

With all the city lights
our sky is sorely blurred,
we cannot see the night
its stars now are obscured

For all our worldly light
we have become too blind to see,
the sky is not as bright
as it used to be

What happened to the sky
where we could see afar,
what's become of that good night
where we could wish upon a star

Now we are compromised
our sky filled with debris,
marred by city lights
starry nights only a memory.

~d.knape

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dadio
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Re: City Lights

Post by dadio » May 11th, 2015, 2:48 pm

Fine poem 8)

saw
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Re: City Lights

Post by saw » May 11th, 2015, 3:54 pm

critical mass I'd say....well done
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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