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the art in evolutuion

Posted: July 2nd, 2015, 5:26 pm
by saw
time drips like fallen holy water
through the storm drains behind the eyes
it finds its way to the quantum ocean
where it is diluted into a mere droplet of breath

my life is thinning hair, knees that creak
like forgotten gate hinges, memories faded
threadbare, evaporating, like morning dew
but I am more than my petty difficulties

more, than the obvious fractions, more
than the weathered jigsaw pieces that remain
my mind is rich loam, a peat bog of imagination
my soul is an ancient redwood, sturdy, battle tested

my eyes are wise like rasputin's owls, calm
like a seabird soaring over timeless shores
my heart expels carbon data telling stories only I know
my being is more than decaying dna.... it is the art of evolution

Re: the art in evolutuion

Posted: July 3rd, 2015, 12:59 am
by Tjflowers80
It's great to have you back saw. We missed you. And again wonderful.

Re: the art in evolutuion

Posted: July 3rd, 2015, 7:49 am
by theirishsea
Some nice lines, images, expressions and thoughts

Re: the art in evolutuion

Posted: July 3rd, 2015, 3:45 pm
by WIREMAN
real nice....so good i think i'll read it again....

Re: the art in evolutuion

Posted: July 4th, 2015, 1:38 am
by saw
thanx y'all....appreciate the feedback fer sho