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spinning

Posted: July 12th, 2015, 2:28 pm
by saw
you chose the colors
the green tranquility
deep blue contentment

you teased the feng sui
with the simplicity of your art,
the hooded female walks in solitude

in an open field, her layered cloak gray as the sky
her eyes as bottomless as the mystery undisclosed
time is ultraviolet, love is infrared

the white cowl covers her head
and you fantasize about those hidden tresses
hour after hour lying on the floor

writing poetry here
listening to jazz in this room
staring at those eyes wanting colorful answers

what color is her hair you think
why would that be important to you
why does she keep your mind eternally

spinning
oh...now I see
spinning.....is a Good thing

Re: spinning

Posted: July 13th, 2015, 1:28 am
by Tjflowers80
Absolutely amazing! Do you write these for someone or are they just dreams waiting for reality? I love them!

Re: spinning

Posted: July 13th, 2015, 6:23 am
by judih
Lovely

Re: spinning

Posted: July 14th, 2015, 9:55 am
by the mingo
8)

Re: spinning

Posted: July 15th, 2015, 12:04 pm
by saw
thanx y'all...and Jess in a way it is for someone....a woman in a painting

Re: spinning

Posted: July 15th, 2015, 5:59 pm
by Tjflowers80
Love it still!