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10 billion stars

Post by the mingo » August 7th, 2015, 8:15 am

three thirty in the morning
i get out of bed, start coffee
open the back door, look up -
ten billion stars rush
into my eyes
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: 10 billion stars

Post by saw » August 7th, 2015, 9:41 am

10 billion give or take a few....
a billion coffee grounds
can't match the starlight
that filters into your soul
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: 10 billion stars

Post by judih » August 9th, 2015, 11:34 pm

every star its place
nothing falls
all rises

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Re: 10 billion stars

Post by the mingo » August 10th, 2015, 7:27 am

Thx saw & judih - 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: 10 billion stars

Post by mtmynd » August 11th, 2015, 4:26 pm

star smacked
lost count counting
shoulda just looked
but was counting on a
abacus made of star stuff
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Re: 10 billion stars

Post by the mingo » August 12th, 2015, 12:32 am

Thx Cec - 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: 10 billion stars

Post by revolutionR » August 12th, 2015, 11:38 am

what a rush.

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Re: 10 billion stars

Post by theirishsea » August 15th, 2015, 10:22 am

I think that feeling/moment could be called an epiphany.
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Re: 10 billion stars

Post by Doreen Peri » August 15th, 2015, 1:53 pm

stars, pinholes in a black
backdrop, letting in light,
night is solace

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Re: 10 billion stars

Post by the mingo » August 15th, 2015, 4:12 pm

Thx doreen & irish & revrab 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: 10 billion stars

Post by WIREMAN » August 15th, 2015, 9:31 pm

Billions and billions of em 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: 10 billion stars

Post by the mingo » August 15th, 2015, 10:16 pm

Thx Wireman - the sight of them stops my mind every time
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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