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thinkin' 'bout a friend

Posted: September 13th, 2015, 10:53 am
by saw
nuthin' deeper....
full bore denial,
a pit without a bottom seen
a pendulum swinging deftly amok

across the face of our comfort zones
fingernails digging into mountainsides
the search for verisimilitude and love
an arduous trek over thankless terrain

guarded by big ugly trolls under the bridge
and the billy goats can get quite gruff,
so you really gotta want to cross over
to the see the grasses of other colors there

and I wonder if objectivity
is possible in a closed system of one, and
I wonder if I should just forget about it
water the tomatoes, dust under the bed

I wish there was more to do, but sometimes
wishing is all we've got

Re: thinkin' 'bout a friend

Posted: September 13th, 2015, 12:08 pm
by WIREMAN
I'm just waitin on a friend......ready for some football! 8)

Re: thinkin' 'bout a friend

Posted: September 13th, 2015, 2:38 pm
by Tjflowers80
Girls night was fun last night.

Re: thinkin' 'bout a friend

Posted: September 14th, 2015, 9:00 am
by the mingo
not to worry, saw, you got a firm grip on the hidden dust bunny - 8)

Re: thinkin' 'bout a friend

Posted: September 14th, 2015, 3:37 pm
by theirishsea
I'm not sure exactly what this poem means. Maybe it is private.

But I understand Wireman's comment----and we had a good game that we could've, should've won----the Ravens that is. The Redskins didn't do too bad either.

saw, about the poem. Some nice phrases but no idea except the general drift what this poem is about.