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bone on bone
Posted: September 19th, 2015, 12:48 pm
by creativesoul
the broken part
the heart
the spine was so inclined
to rub the wrong way
electric impulses shorting out
made it hard not to shout
the sky
held still in the waters of the soul
Re: bone on bone
Posted: September 19th, 2015, 3:14 pm
by WIREMAN
Likea likea....everything about this...the length, the sense of wonder in it
Re: bone on bone
Posted: September 19th, 2015, 7:48 pm
by creativesoul
Thank you-
Re: bone on bone
Posted: September 20th, 2015, 5:12 pm
by saw
simple truth....
Re: bone on bone
Posted: September 21st, 2015, 1:47 am
by the mingo
Re: bone on bone
Posted: September 21st, 2015, 7:03 am
by dadio
Very good. Dostoyevskian in spirit. Love it
Re: bone on bone
Posted: September 23rd, 2015, 11:33 pm
by justwalt
smells sexy,
like... wow
Re: bone on bone
Posted: September 24th, 2015, 10:28 am
by creativesoul
sweet