An eye for an eye
leaves everyone blind
vengeance is always
best left behind
To repay evil with evil
cannot balance a scale
it's just amplified evil
doling out one more fail
Things are only made worse
when you follow that course
why do men still believe
they're immune to this curse
Will man ever learn
or let his soul burn
while anger within him
continues to churn
It's time to wake up
repay evil with kind
your reward is within
as it brings peace of mind
Breaking the cycle
preserving our sight
it may not be easy
but well worth the fight
An Eye for an Eye
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An Eye for an Eye
When we speak we are afraid our words will not be heard or welcomed. But when we are silent, we are still afraid. So it is better to speak. ~ Audre Lorde
Re: An Eye for an Eye
I'm normally not that fond of rhyming poems, but I like this one.....it has the flow of peace itself
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If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
you may end up where you are heading
- justwalt
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Re: An Eye for an Eye
nice ideas, truly I believe,
but I don't have two hundred years
or more to see the change...
fighting evil, (if you're the good guy),
is all there is for good to do.
to not fight evil, equally, creates an imbalance,
and to overpower evil, also creates an imbalance.
but this battle of balance has existed for billions of years...
now which was it... the universe is infinitely huge, or that
we were infinitely small?
but I don't have two hundred years
or more to see the change...
fighting evil, (if you're the good guy),
is all there is for good to do.
to not fight evil, equally, creates an imbalance,
and to overpower evil, also creates an imbalance.
but this battle of balance has existed for billions of years...
now which was it... the universe is infinitely huge, or that
we were infinitely small?
many is a word
- still.trucking
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Re: An Eye for an Eye
RE: An Eye for an Eye
thank you very much for the poem, it was a very satisfying read (f)or me
thank you very much for the poem, it was a very satisfying read (f)or me

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