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saw
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13 minutes

Post by saw » December 23rd, 2015, 2:35 pm

I'm a old fart version
of the modern man
I've allotted just 13 minutes
to finish my project

I'm writing my autobiography
so don't want to yadda blah-blah my life,
some say 13 is unlucky
but I'm not superstitious

nor am I sincere, c'mon
there's no way to explain myself,
that's best left to others than even care
to offer an opinion

shit, wait a minute 13 minutes
is way too much time, WAY too much !
I am a speck of dust
DONE !

Bravo !
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I just saved 12 and a half minutes
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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justwalt
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Re: 13 minutes

Post by justwalt » December 23rd, 2015, 10:00 pm

now ya did it, changed yer fate by twelve point five minutes...
nice job

many is a word
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Re: 13 minutes

Post by the mingo » December 25th, 2015, 1:10 pm

crack me up 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: 13 minutes

Post by Doreen Peri » December 25th, 2015, 11:47 pm

Hahah! Funny piece. I like it!

Now, take a couple of years and really write your autobiography 'cause i want to read it. ;)
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