E Poets

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leafsailors ghost
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E Poets

Post by leafsailors ghost » January 22nd, 2016, 8:57 am

A steady rain of words
each of a world spinning in its own light
now our little note books fling around a restless world
scatters by an electronic wind
to settle in the eddy pools of poetry sights
we greet each other
please comment on others
read click then gone
swirling away on a sea of words
friendships form
almost make believe
but then we had imaginary friends
when we were young
but then again slip away
it is still
just past the midnight hour
the room is empty
the board index changes
the poet walks out
just to be

saw
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Re: E Poets

Post by saw » January 22nd, 2016, 8:15 pm

this is probably the best capturing of the e-poet world I have ever read....even electronics can't hold back good poetry, nor all your little e-friends from commenting....nice work
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Doreen Peri
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Re: E Poets

Post by Doreen Peri » January 22nd, 2016, 8:49 pm

Terrific! ... I'll come back and jam on it later

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judih
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Re: E Poets

Post by judih » January 23rd, 2016, 12:19 am

new posts
new creations
threads of responses

a new day
so much to read
who will stand brave?

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the mingo
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Re: E Poets

Post by the mingo » January 23rd, 2016, 11:05 am

friendships form
almost make believe
but then we had imaginary friends
when we were young
solid piece of truth this - 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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dadio
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Re: E Poets

Post by dadio » February 6th, 2016, 5:55 pm

That is spot on. Neat poem 8)

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