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The Sky is Green
Posted: January 25th, 2016, 10:44 am
by Brian mclaughlin
The sky now blue
the warmth returning
springtime has come
leaving the cold of winter behind
the trees bring forth new buds
giving life to new leaves
the leaves fill the trees
and my eyes and mind now drawn
to the wonder of natures ability
to turn the sky green
Re: The Sky is Green
Posted: January 25th, 2016, 5:08 pm
by mnaz
Interesting piece.
Nice inversion here-- the end of the bleakness and "rebirth" of spring is emphasized by even the sky becoming infused with green.
Funny, when I clicked on this one I expected something about severe weather, since the sky turns green during some of the worst storms. (I think I wrote a poem with green sky in it a few years go.)
Re: The Sky is Green
Posted: January 25th, 2016, 5:33 pm
by Brian mclaughlin
mnaz wrote:Interesting piece.
Nice inversion here-- the end of the bleakness and "rebirth" of spring is emphasized by even the sky becoming infused with green.
Funny, when I clicked on this one I expected something about severe weather, since the sky turns green during some of the worst storms. (I think I wrote a poem with green sky in it a few years go.)
perspective, makes all the difference in the world.
thanx for your time.