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The First Commandment

Posted: February 7th, 2016, 10:54 am
by Rodak
I watched the arc
of her bare foot
as she sighed
that special note
and shifted her position
on the seat
of the straight back chair.

Something like a wet rose
(( flashed ))
a silent summons.

Adam naked I obeyed.

On my knees I walked
toward that gateless garden
impressed by an unspoken word
into the service of a queenly need.

Re: The First Commandment

Posted: February 7th, 2016, 3:24 pm
by WIREMAN
...did u partake of the forbidden fruit?.....excellent poem 8)

Re: The First Commandment

Posted: February 8th, 2016, 9:24 am
by leafsailors ghost
Crazy fine ..YES!

Re: The First Commandment

Posted: February 8th, 2016, 6:58 pm
by Rodak
WIREMAN wrote:...did u partake of the forbidden fruit?.....excellent poem 8)
I plead the Fifth.

Re: The First Commandment

Posted: February 8th, 2016, 6:58 pm
by Rodak
leafsailors ghost wrote:Crazy fine ..YES!
Thanks!

Re: The First Commandment

Posted: February 10th, 2016, 1:34 pm
by Doreen Peri
Hi Rodak. Welcome to the Studio.

I like this piece... Sounds like you had fun! ;)