Steely-eyed Jim

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mnaz
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Steely-eyed Jim

Post by mnaz » March 1st, 2016, 3:15 pm

Steely-eyed Jim built the city with his bear hands.
His arms are oak trees; his head a barrel chest;
his eyes molten rivets; hair a 12 gauge sheet.
He roams the rust-bubbled girders of Ohio;
lines up boilermakers on a boozewood bar.
Bourbon flows in canyons of his rocky chin.

His Peterbilt mind; his size forty-two steel toe
crush scented magazines like mere paper.
His cast-iron legs, unfiltered camel biceps,
have the strength to cut down Everest,
though his paycheck cuts nary a tab.

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Re: Steely-eyed Jim

Post by leafsailors ghost » March 1st, 2016, 7:35 pm

Enjoyed every word of it !!!!! I know this man down here as foundry Dan , same cut of cloth

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Re: Steely-eyed Jim

Post by saw » March 2nd, 2016, 12:09 pm

requiem for the blue collar ?.....where is john henry ?.....you load sixteens tons, whatta ya get.....another day older and deeper in debt.....
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Steely-eyed Jim

Post by mnaz » March 2nd, 2016, 5:23 pm

Thanks leaf, saw. Yeah, a lot of us know guys like this, or at least have seen them in movies, or heard about them in lore... "Sixteen Tons"-- yeah, that's it, pretty much. Some wacky descriptors here to convey the image, but that's part of the fun.

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Re: Steely-eyed Jim

Post by Ghost » March 7th, 2016, 9:46 pm

I know this guy.

Sandburg wrote about his grandfather.

Good to see the bloodline still flows
(as does the ink).

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Re: Steely-eyed Jim

Post by mnaz » March 14th, 2016, 10:07 pm

Just noticed this. Thanks Ghost. I had to read some Sandburg poetry after that.

I'm really not around this place much these days-- just the odd poem every month or 2 ...

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