Old Woman

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the mingo
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Old Woman

Post by the mingo » March 7th, 2016, 8:45 am

old woman
sits alone
no games
on the table
before her
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

leafsailors ghost
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Re: Old Woman

Post by leafsailors ghost » March 7th, 2016, 8:54 am

This is alone ,I can see a long slanting shaft of sunlight making the wood glow in its path
some dream almost awake in her mind, the poem just a stirring of soul.

saw
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Re: Old Woman

Post by saw » March 7th, 2016, 10:31 am

few can just sit
no entertainment
no distractions from handheld devices
few know the peace
of sitting at a table
staring at your weathered hands

8) 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

Ghost
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Re: Old Woman

Post by Ghost » March 7th, 2016, 9:35 pm

I can see her.

She's a reverse-incarnation, a prophecy
we aren't sure we want to come true.

Powerful image. She speaks through you,
and her silence is your voice, poet.

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