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Old Woman

Posted: March 7th, 2016, 8:45 am
by the mingo
old woman
sits alone
no games
on the table
before her

Re: Old Woman

Posted: March 7th, 2016, 8:54 am
by leafsailors ghost
This is alone ,I can see a long slanting shaft of sunlight making the wood glow in its path
some dream almost awake in her mind, the poem just a stirring of soul.

Re: Old Woman

Posted: March 7th, 2016, 10:31 am
by saw
few can just sit
no entertainment
no distractions from handheld devices
few know the peace
of sitting at a table
staring at your weathered hands

8) 8)

Re: Old Woman

Posted: March 7th, 2016, 9:35 pm
by Ghost
I can see her.

She's a reverse-incarnation, a prophecy
we aren't sure we want to come true.

Powerful image. She speaks through you,
and her silence is your voice, poet.