when the whip comes down

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creativesoul
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when the whip comes down

Post by creativesoul » March 14th, 2016, 3:34 pm

i know the STING of the pressure
hurry up and learn this
because something large and in charge is in control
gotta believe
because my memoray is like salvdor dalis 'remebrance'
the ants
are here
attracted to the honey
that knowledge
inside
somehow lost to finals week
broken phones
virtual color
post bac art
i cant do it
lik e cheerleaders mounted on my shoulders :twisted:
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

saw
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Re: when the whip comes down

Post by saw » March 14th, 2016, 4:11 pm

flip those cheerleaders
from your shoulders, let another acrobat
catch them in mid air
and when they come back on the trapeze
let them bounce in the net
'cause you already got your hands full.... 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

creativesoul
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Re: when the whip comes down

Post by creativesoul » March 14th, 2016, 4:32 pm

That is awesome! Hugs
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: when the whip comes down

Post by leafsailors ghost » March 14th, 2016, 5:31 pm

It is that you are a creative soul
you are the teacher yet
the big remember this
is blunt
past this and that done undone
ring the new harmonic
ask the unanswered question
colors have no names for those that really know
what do you see
I say you know
go woman be electric and invent your dance
invent your music
I stomp and shout out loud
art informs the scholar
not the scholar informs the art
give me the sting
I will drink it and be crazy drunk
while you dance naked!

creativesoul
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Re: when the whip comes down

Post by creativesoul » March 14th, 2016, 6:01 pm

we it seems dance to the music we hear
yes
the sun came out today
but the wind
froze my clothed body

the color i see
it is my saint
my whore
my best bitch
it is the only thing i really trust
besides the dog
i want it to be hot and sexy
and it is
it is never tired
yet t o d a y - i think of sleep
dreaming with paintbrushes tied to my feet
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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