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transitions

Posted: March 19th, 2016, 3:48 pm
by saw
this is the last poem of the day
I have decided it's time for me
to shift the creative gears from gloomy ink
to stringed vibrations, the bass lines
have a baritone voice
that cannot be ignored, my life
is an unknown opera
in a language I don't understand
but that's okay

Re: transitions

Posted: March 20th, 2016, 12:13 am
by judih
didgeridoo it
circulated breath
body renewal

Re: transitions

Posted: March 20th, 2016, 3:02 am
by WIREMAN
Round & round
Deep bass lines
Endure.....upright.

Re: transitions

Posted: March 20th, 2016, 8:04 am
by saw
a hint of Terence McKenna
micro-dosing the population
dreams now reality

Re: transitions

Posted: March 20th, 2016, 9:37 pm
by Ghost
I do like the opening line.

And I especially like your metaphor concerning the opera.

Re: transitions

Posted: March 21st, 2016, 7:51 am
by the mingo
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