not a haiku

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K2.
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not a haiku

Post by K2. » April 2nd, 2016, 5:16 am

Roses are red
sonnets aren't blue
haiku's aren't green
this is none of the above
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saw
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Re: just some things

Post by saw » April 2nd, 2016, 9:04 am

there is some really excellent poetry here, but I think listing so much at once probably won't get the attention it deserves because of the sheer volume in on place....I would suggest entering a poem or two and slowly add more poems as the days go by, so your colleagues can focus on the details..

There are superb poems about war here.....brutal and tender at the same time....war is a subject that cries for more ink by skilled wordsmiths like yourself

the Romantic Poetry poem gave a pleasant chuckle....very creative use of language that truly painted a picture : "She said it sounded like a/ speedo stretched across a plumber's crack."
great stuff

The Color of Hope's simplicity is both poignant and well,.. colorful....

Therapy is a cool twist on both therapy and smoking....very enjoyable

Well that's it for now...perhaps further feedback will follow in the coming days

Good Writing
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

K2.
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Re: just some things

Post by K2. » April 2nd, 2016, 9:34 am

Thanks saw

one poem

David

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