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not a haiku
Posted: April 2nd, 2016, 5:16 am
by K2.
Roses are red
sonnets aren't blue
haiku's aren't green
this is none of the above
Re: just some things
Posted: April 2nd, 2016, 9:04 am
by saw
there is some really excellent poetry here, but I think listing so much at once probably won't get the attention it deserves because of the sheer volume in on place....I would suggest entering a poem or two and slowly add more poems as the days go by, so your colleagues can focus on the details..
There are superb poems about war here.....brutal and tender at the same time....war is a subject that cries for more ink by skilled wordsmiths like yourself
the Romantic Poetry poem gave a pleasant chuckle....very creative use of language that truly painted a picture : "She said it sounded like a/ speedo stretched across a plumber's crack."
great stuff
The Color of Hope's simplicity is both poignant and well,.. colorful....
Therapy is a cool twist on both therapy and smoking....very enjoyable
Well that's it for now...perhaps further feedback will follow in the coming days
Good Writing
Re: just some things
Posted: April 2nd, 2016, 9:34 am
by K2.
Thanks saw
one poem
David