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last poem of the night

Posted: May 3rd, 2016, 9:24 am
by saw
generally I seem to know
even before I begin, this
will be the last poem of the night

so the pressure is on,
don't want to crank out a dud
you never know this may be the last poem ever

so I try to gather my self, weave
my thoughts into a brilliant afghan
to show the world the importance of color

I do see the hollow yarn
in all its duality, I watch my arthritic fingers
wrinkle before my eyes

this blanket has taken a lifetime
every nuance is woven into a tale
and in the end the moral is creative and warm

I leave you now
pull the textiles up to my nose
inhale the years like pure cocaine

I get a rush as the decades swirl
a windswept dervish wrapped in an autobiographical shawl,
once again, I am high

Re: last poem of the night

Posted: May 3rd, 2016, 10:44 pm
by judih
pull the textiles up to my nose
inhale the years like pure cocaine

I get a rush as the decades swirl
bravo!

Re: last poem of the night

Posted: May 4th, 2016, 5:02 pm
by saw
thank you judih, appreciate it....

Re: last poem of the night

Posted: May 8th, 2016, 1:20 pm
by the mingo
* 8) *

Re: last poem of the night

Posted: May 8th, 2016, 1:40 pm
by WIREMAN
ahhhhhhhh that poetic high.....a rush like no other 8)

Re: last poem of the night

Posted: May 11th, 2016, 3:51 pm
by leafsailors ghost
A poem for me walked up in a late afternoon as the baby slept
it was this poem of yours , yes I said fellow well met ,I agree with Judith..I am thinking life gathers love.it keeps.

Re: last poem of the night

Posted: May 13th, 2016, 3:06 pm
by sasha
no duds were cranked out here.

Re: last poem of the night

Posted: May 14th, 2016, 2:05 am
by creativesoul
lovely write- quite intimate 8)