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I'll Write It Slowly, SO As Not TO BOre YOu
Posted: April 5th, 2005, 6:19 pm
by izeveryboyin
Gibberish, madness,
Wanton sex goddess
Pallad and bleeding
Moaning... darkness...
FEAR
Homosexuality in a trunk
Monkey in morning newspapers
Cars will roll by, Bessy is high
Invaribly I, Fuck over and die.
Posted: April 5th, 2005, 6:30 pm
by hester_prynne
Indeed Iz, pillowtalk ain't always what it's cracked up to be eh?
I enjoyed this, the way it gracefully winds down and sputters into rhyme.
I know the feeling well.
You capture it nicely.....
H
Posted: April 6th, 2005, 7:53 pm
by izeveryboyin
hey thanks... appreaciate your appreciation!!
--k
Posted: April 6th, 2005, 8:04 pm
by WIREMAN
I'm diggin it Iz......thinkin bout that noise as the cars and trucks rolled past today and me with an aching hangover head on....was fun earnin it tho.....
Posted: April 7th, 2005, 1:14 pm
by izeveryboyin
hangover head... such a great play on words. (was it intended?)
--k
Posted: April 7th, 2005, 2:59 pm
by WIREMAN
Ya know I am a very serious writer Iz....don't cha...hell yeah I had a hangover head on............how's life on the front lines????????
Posted: April 8th, 2005, 12:22 pm
by izeveryboyin
I don't know... I was napping when they took position.
--k
Posted: April 18th, 2005, 10:41 am
by jimboloco
Where do she come out with this harmonious discontent?
It makes tension and drama slide like sweet steamed okra
right down my gullet, I could suck her in that way.
She carries a sensuality that an old man craves. Yup!