Susie Q

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saw
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Susie Q

Post by saw » July 10th, 2016, 8:58 am

her eyes were calico
like her personality
speckles of fairy dust on the lips
of a far away smile

she was outside the molds
shattered all the calculations
like a mirror
flung back at the sky

we basked in our brevity
it was never about quantity
only the moments of rapture
fleeting as a hawk in a tree

that bird is going to fly
it's going to prey like it is told
we never spoke of the future
we knew, this was it.
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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Re: Susie Q

Post by the mingo » July 10th, 2016, 9:54 am

* 8) *
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: Susie Q

Post by WIREMAN » July 10th, 2016, 10:52 am

Future prey...like NOW! 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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Re: Susie Q

Post by Arcadia » July 10th, 2016, 1:04 pm

sweet...! :D
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Re: Susie Q

Post by judih » July 11th, 2016, 5:44 am

sweet, indeed
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