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Prisoners
Posted: July 29th, 2016, 1:39 pm
by the mingo
hot humid breeze
wildflowers along the river
bend with it
leaves of the trees
raise with its passage
- a brief conversation -
that does nothing to cool
in the heavy air
four white butterflies
dance over the river
dance together over & up the road
- disappearing to distance
prisoners of hope -
Re: Prisoners
Posted: July 29th, 2016, 3:47 pm
by WIREMAN
for a hot second i watched 3 yellow butterflies from the train dancing the other day, wondering how long do they survive?

Re: Prisoners
Posted: July 30th, 2016, 9:48 am
by saw
scene of summer....could feel the warm breeze....

Re: Prisoners
Posted: July 30th, 2016, 10:32 am
by creativesoul
i really liked this one-
you would think we were along the same river- -
beautiful-
Re: Prisoners
Posted: July 30th, 2016, 11:44 pm
by the mingo
WIREMAN wrote:for a hot second i watched 3 yellow butterflies from the train dancing the other day, wondering how long do they survive?

Thx for reading, Wireman - appreciate it
Re: Prisoners
Posted: July 30th, 2016, 11:46 pm
by the mingo
saw wrote:scene of summer....could feel the warm breeze....

yeah it is - before the end of August the white butterflies in the poem will be long gone -
Thx for reading, saw -
Re: Prisoners
Posted: July 30th, 2016, 11:47 pm
by the mingo
creativesoul wrote:i really liked this one-
you would think we were along the same river- -
beautiful-
Thx for reading, Jana -
