Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

Maybe you made coffee,
maybe you left a note.

I can only imagine the warmth
of your hand as you closed the door.

There was no need for words,
best things are left unsaid.

superb....a joy to my eyes.....and brain...

Interesting how a flood of memories came with this tide of a few simple words . The warmth of her hand . yes. so what is this show not tell bullshit they always harp on? I laughed when I tHOUGHT ABOUT THAT NONSENCE QUESTION ASKED ABOUT A POEM.
DID MY HEART HEAR THE WORDS?
ANSWER YES

missed this yesterday - but what would have today have been without it ? Thx, 68

saw wrote:superb....a joy to my eyes.....and brain...

Been married over 30 years. She's still my bride.

leafsailors ghost wrote:Interesting how a flood of memories came with this tide of a few simple words . The warmth of her hand . yes. so what is this show not tell bullshit they always harp on? I laughed when I tHOUGHT ABOUT THAT NONSENCE QUESTION ASKED ABOUT A POEM.
DID MY HEART HEAR THE WORDS?
ANSWER YES

Depends on what's showing and telling sometimes But you're right...most of it is BS. Just write.

Glad it's talking to ya'

68degrees

68....

the mingo wrote:missed this yesterday - but what would have today have been without it ? Thx, 68

Say hi to everyone at AT for me. Tell 'em I miss 'em

68degrees