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blues in the sand haiku
Posted: September 3rd, 2016, 8:32 am
by sweetwater
the poet in sand
coloring blocks and crayons
beaches and parties
that go on all night
drinking into the sunrise
memories in play
the proverbial
life in the cliche comes home
in the whereabout
as to your sandals
and how they got lost at sea
the time it takes you
Re: blues in the sand haiku
Posted: September 3rd, 2016, 8:53 am
by saw
catchy little jam accompaniment ...
Re: blues in the sand haiku
Posted: September 3rd, 2016, 9:20 am
by the mingo
o sweet fertile blues !
Re: blues in the sand haiku
Posted: September 3rd, 2016, 10:35 pm
by judih
very cool ku riffs as music sets the mind
Re: blues in the sand haiku
Posted: September 4th, 2016, 11:08 am
by 68degrees
For some reason I want to hear Barry White sing this.
Love the beach...the sounds, the sights.
68degrees
Re: blues in the sand haiku
Posted: September 4th, 2016, 11:47 am
by the mingo
68degrees wrote:For some reason I want to hear Barry White sing this.
68degrees
Barry White ? You're crackin' me up here, 68
Re: blues in the sand haiku
Posted: September 5th, 2016, 7:57 am
by leafsailors ghost
A new blue three level haiku
the music is cool
all in the all night sunrise listen to the surf
drink that last corner feeling.
dig it